Hagane Gumi

Not trying to offend you but you are going to get offended.
While it looks fine standing the moment you move you will see all her bugs.
https://postimg.org/image/ia9q4h19h/
https://postimg.org/image/6jvsn38h1/
Those pics show the most critical bugs,i know that is hard to make a model without too much bugs but bugs on hair,feets or parts that one don't pay too much atention are acceptable the other are a simply NO!
This is what happens when you dismember a model and don't attach the parts correctly on 3ds max

And he get bugs

@Yuuki_AkameHi greetings! No problem Yuuki-sempai I am an apprentice yet xD I will hope i can be best, beacuse nobody is born knowing!

Perfect

@josehatsuneexcelente trabajo jose,aunque si ves comentarios de errores,lo puedes arreglar y volver a subir otra version asi como lo hicistes con tus anteriores,buem aporte,y espero sigan subiendo mas skins de vocailds,estan excelentes gracias